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If tomorrow comes

Gloomy sky weeping
depression happier now
if tomorrow comes....


By:kashinath karmakar(14th January,2011)

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  1. Date: 2/18/2011 7:13:00 PM
    Hey, kash are you here right this moment? I am just now going off. Hope to see a new poem from ya soon, GATOR!

  1. Date: 2/14/2011 11:32:00 PM
    hey, still waiting for a new poem!!! Even a tiny senryu would do!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/8/2011 7:35:00 AM
    Really love the images in this Kashinath, wonderful but so sad. Thank you for your visit to my poems.

  1. Date: 1/28/2011 6:52:00 AM
    Thankxx Kashinath for your always warm and welcome comments on my poetry.. this Haiku is wonderful and deserved to place but each sponsor is different my friend in their judging so good luck next time.. don't get discouraged ..just keep entering luv.. happy weekend...

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:00:00 AM
    Hi Kashinath -- This is a lovely haiku. Very, very good description of hope for tomorrow. I love the first line 'gloomy sky weeping'; that's what it feels like sometimes, doesn't it. Thanks for your kind words about my poem 'Elephant Years'. I much appreciate your reading my work and taking time to comment. Best wishes. Deb

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 1:15:00 PM
    I certainly would have ranked this haiku high in the contest, Kashinath. As for the Tsunami poem James and I wrote, it was a fantasy. We didn't have a specific tsunami in mind. It just seems like we're seeing tsunamis more frequently than ever before now and we wanted to write about romance. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 6:02:00 PM
    Yes, you are right. The earthquake was in latur, Kutch in 2000. I volunteered myself as i was in India at the time. kashinath Thanks for your comments as always

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 4:08:00 PM
    Wonderful Haiku, enjoyed this. Harry

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 3:34:00 PM
    I concur with Carolyn, it's a well written Haiku. And I do hope all our tomorrows come....:)

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 1:06:00 PM
    I'm so sorry this didn't place, Kashinath. I absolutely love it! Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:35:00 AM
    I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Kashinath. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 4:09:00 AM
    Enjoyed the read of your Haiku, Kashinat! All the best!...Gert

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 11:02:00 PM
    Excellent Haiku, good luck in contest. Harry

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 7:05:00 PM
    great haiku, Kashinath! Best of luck in the contest! Thanks for your congrats on "Avatar", much appreciated:)

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 3:39:00 PM
    HI, Kashinath. Thanks for your comments today. I'm Just trying to catch up with as many comments as I can before running upstairs and making spaghetti for tonight. I sure love that stuff! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 1:03:00 PM
    Excellent Haiku, Kashinath. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 12:08:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest with one..Reads like a winner..I am glad that happier now..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 8:14:00 AM
    Kashinath, a sad but really beautiful haiku.. Good luck for Irma's contest ;) WN

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 12:31:00 PM
    Kashinath, regarding the form new to you "blank verse," it is like the meter of a sonnet (iambic pentameter) but you don't have to worry about rhyming it. That is all it means! It can be any number of lines, but ten syllables with iambic meter is all that is required! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/15/2011 9:35:00 AM
    Rainy days do have a way of bringing us down, Kashinath. You're a very talented writer and I expect to see this entry in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn