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If Things Were Different

If I weren't a poet, what would I be An artist, a singer, or a designer? Would I have been something next to a deity? Oh, I couldn't imagine anything finer! If I weren't loved, how bitter would I be in the present time A little, a lot, more than I could ever devise? Would I long for affection that I predict will never be mine Or would I think love will take me by surprise? If I were born earlier, what period would I have occupied The forties, the fifties, or the sixties? Would my name have lived on after I died Or would there be no one alive who'd miss me? If I weren't me, who would I be And who would take my place? Would I have had a different destiny? I hope to God that wouldn't have been the case I love the person I am today, I love the person I am to become I would not want it any other way Many lives I could've lived, but thank God He chose this one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/8/2009 11:17:00 AM
Lakisha - I just want to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this last week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:55:00 PM
Very touching poem Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:24:00 AM
Hi Lakisha, your poem is uplifting and distinct. Congratulations on your magnificient poetry being featured this week. post some more. Ernilando
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Date: 3/6/2009 4:34:00 AM
I am very touched by your optimistic message... Keep on creating! :) G*d bless, D.M
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Date: 3/4/2009 5:41:00 PM
Beautiful and uplifting message here, We are all unique within ourselves, just the way God made us...We as a nation need to love and accept who we are and trust that God has great plans for us all..~Wonderful reflections here~...You have a beautiful gift, thank you for sharing it with us...Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week..God Bless *Tyesha
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Date: 3/4/2009 12:41:00 PM
Very nice and a message that everybody needs. To live and appreciate the person that God made and receive the destiny that He gives to all of us. Good job on this poem!
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Date: 3/3/2009 12:48:00 PM
"If Things Were Different" and you weren't a poet, it would be poetry's loss. Congratulations on your poem being featured. God Bless, Lakisha. Vince
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Date: 3/2/2009 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2009 6:10:00 AM
Warmest congrats Lakisha on this beautiful and inspiring featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/1/2009 5:41:00 PM
What an uplifting poem. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/18/2008 5:40:00 PM
Just be you. Nobody does it better. This is a poem of self esteem and a subtle pride. This is what people should feel like no matter what. From the least to the most, we each bring something special to the table. God Bless. Vince
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