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If Our Love Should End

If our Love should end Will you still be my friend Will you cry for me Like I would For you Please don’t lie tell me what’s true Will you stay by me forever Or will you leave me here Like the man I once held dear Never again to hold me near And will I waste another two year Fighting of a thousand tears Feeding my enticing fear What would you do If our love should…end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/6/2009 1:06:00 AM
It's difficult, but not impossible, to remain friends after a love ends. Just hearing a loved one confess his feelings are not there anymore can break the trust causing "a thousand tears" to be shed. But when true love comes along, you will have someone who will stand by you forever, Ariel. Excellent writing! Welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to reading more of your work. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 12/4/2009 4:16:00 PM
what a nice write in love we all wonder what if , and you wrote it perfectly, keep on writing on.
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Date: 12/4/2009 1:13:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Ariel. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2009 12:40:00 AM
It sounds so much like what I am going through right now. You capture the sorrow so well. Hang in there Great write.
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