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If Our Love Should End

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If Our Love Should End

If our Love should end 
Will you still be my friend 
Will you cry for me 
Like I would For you 
Please don’t lie tell me what’s true

Will you stay by  me forever 
Or will you leave me here 
Like the man I once held dear 
Never again to hold me near 

And will I waste another two year 
Fighting of a thousand tears 
Feeding my enticing fear

What would you do 
If our love should…end

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  1. Date: 12/6/2009 1:06:00 AM
    It's difficult, but not impossible, to remain friends after a love ends. Just hearing a loved one confess his feelings are not there anymore can break the trust causing "a thousand tears" to be shed. But when true love comes along, you will have someone who will stand by you forever, Ariel. Excellent writing! Welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to reading more of your work. Best Wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 4:16:00 PM
    what a nice write in love we all wonder what if , and you wrote it perfectly, keep on writing on.

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 1:13:00 PM
    I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Ariel. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 12:40:00 AM
    It sounds so much like what I am going through right now. You capture the sorrow so well. Hang in there Great write.