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if my inner world

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if my inner world


if my inner world

  binds one light with moons in space...

          I must be their child



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Haiku on Probabilities Contest
Sponsor: Marvin Celestial
by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 8/11/2014 9:43:00 AM
    Wonderful, congrats on making the winners list.

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 8:11:00 AM
    Wow love the way u took it,, connecting self with universe, great ! Congrats on big win!

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 11:06:00 AM
    I love the "we are all stardust" feel of this Nette...beautiful

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 11:02:00 AM
    congrats for the lovely Haiku win, Nette.

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 9:41:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win, Nette. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write! Pandita

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 9:10:00 AM
    Unique and beautiful! Grats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 9:53:00 PM
    Deep and meaningful haiku. congrats. nette

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 8:29:00 PM
    Big congrats on this write my friend. Congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 7:01:00 PM
    so glad to see this on the top ten list. It was one of the best. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 6:32:00 PM
    fabulous Haiku congrats on a great win:-) Hugs jan xx

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 2:42:00 PM
    I do believe you are a child of a special universe...wonderful nett.....PS..I've missed being around nd you too.....granny gran is still holding her own and my garden going crazy!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/6/2014 6:57:00 PM
    wow, I had not caught this one before either. One of the best I have seen in this particular contest.

  1. Date: 8/1/2014 12:08:00 PM
    very nice haiku of inner world enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl

  1. Date: 7/29/2014 6:43:00 PM
    Nette, , Love the scenario .... Enjoyed the Haiku.... LINDA

  1. Date: 7/29/2014 12:12:00 AM
    That is so good to know you are all right, save for your rooftop, basta ingat kayo lagi-- kami, mga puno namin ang napuruhan. Ulan na naman ng ulan ngayon, buti walang pasok! Really like the thoughts you put in this haiku, makes me think-- for some reason, I am now thinking of Annie, what's that song "Maybe" I know, medyo malayo, yours is deeper in meaning, in a universal way-- you definitely have your way with words! Sending hugs!

  1. Date: 7/25/2014 12:43:00 PM
    How divine! A lot of insight with spiritual thoughts as well as giving off a sense of connection with all things. Thank you for enlightening me.

  1. Date: 7/23/2014 7:34:00 PM
    Nice Haiku we are all children of the Universe, but most only know this intellectually. You prove by your writing that you have known this well done Nette....peter

  1. Date: 7/23/2014 11:09:00 AM
    Amen to that! :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2014 10:08:00 AM
    If you can convey this sense of unity with all worlds here and beyond, you are surely a child of the universe. Supreme poem from your eternal pen!

  1. Date: 7/22/2014 10:19:00 PM
    Your work is so full of magic and beauty, you must be their child, no doubt:)

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