If I Was Yours

The depth of my Love would be immeasurable, People would look upon this Love in Awe
Only once before has there been a greater Love, the Father and His only begotten SON
Romeo walks away from Juliet : embarrassed , Paris gives up Helen for he has seen a Truer 
LOVE
I would put YOU on a pedestal held up by the  warmth of my Heart  filtering through the 
Sunbeams
The Diamond stars, YOUR Tiara , A full moon provides the glow of Your Golden Gown 
The Aroma of  Roses, of all  of the fragrances of nature,  YOUR Womanly essence
My Heartbeats for YOUR Joy and Happiness, it flutters when it sees the smile upon Your face
My Heart cries in agony if it sees a tear fall from those beautiful light brown almost Hazel 
eyes
And when YOU sleep I see a Renaissance Picture by one of the great Masters
If I was Yours, my LOVE, Heart, Soul, my Being would be entwined with YOU FOREVER

Inspired by and Dedicated to “ BARBARA JEAN GORLICK “ With ALL MY LOVE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/15/2012 5:21:00 AM
This is a beautiful and amazing poem, filled with glowing love, which warms the soul, I have to go to a birthday party for my granddaughter now, but will read more of yours later, love as ever Elizabeth
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Date: 5/16/2012 5:17:00 PM
Amazing verse... Always, Laura
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Date: 2/11/2010 10:09:00 PM
"The depth of my Love" Gosh, The very beggining tuned me in! i use these exact words in the way i express mine in my poetry as well! that so cool. this is beautiful by the way. i never knew such kind&amazing wonders could be found in any kind of man.purity of your heart is what i see in this write of yours! -Always LYnette
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Date: 12/1/2009 7:27:00 PM
Very Nice poem...Enjoyed..Marty
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:02:00 PM
aw to sweet, nicely penned! enjyoyed reading today.
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Date: 11/27/2009 2:26:00 PM
Beautiful tribute, beautifully written love Simone
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Date: 11/24/2009 3:08:00 PM
Nicely done tribute to a great poetess. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:41:00 PM
U are too kind, kind Sir... thankxxx for your comments about my entry HG.. if we do quarrel.. making up is more the fun.. sounds like a poem in the making... luv .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/23/2009 6:44:00 PM
HG, see your mail..I'm in shock...BG
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Date: 11/23/2009 5:00:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to BG, HG, so happy she has inspired u to write this lovely piece .. I was just getting ready to apply for the position.. have u forgotten your "Candy Sweet".. never hear from u anymore... and if I WAS YOURS u would not want another.. truly romantic poetry from a truly romantic guy... luv .. happy turkey day.. Linda-Mrie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/22/2009 11:59:00 PM
Romanticism at it's best HG, nice work...Raul
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Date: 11/22/2009 11:53:00 PM
Beautiful dedication to a lovely woman..deep love flowing on paper..few men have your heart my dear friend,and this lady is one fine lucky lady:)Charma
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Date: 11/22/2009 9:55:00 PM
so much love! great poem and lovely dedication.
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