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If I Could Write a Poem

Thank you
brave heart fireman,
thanks for saving us all
from the towering inferno, 
if I could, I would write a nice poem
to inform the world about you,
but I can't, so I lick
your wounds,and say
thank you!



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Placement: None  ;   (February 2011)

Contest:Doggy Gratitude

Sponsor:Joyce Johnson

By:kashinath karmakar(23rd Jan. 2011)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 9:08:00 PM

Hey, Kash just saying hellooooo I finally got time to catch up on some things here. It's dead as can be today. Good time for me to play catch up!! And maybe write a poem tonight!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/6/2011 5:59:00 AM

Don't know how I missed this Gem... so well done and heartfelt...always Michael

Deb Radke

Date: 2/4/2011 12:45:00 PM

Oh, this is so well said. Good write. Love, Deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2011 10:52:00 AM

Here again to say This was so sweet!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2011 6:45:00 AM

thankxx Sara for your always warm and always welcome and encouraging comments on my poetry... happy weekend with luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/28/2011 2:55:00 AM

A delightful write Kashinath.. Wishing you all the best for Joyce's contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 7:30:00 PM

Kashinath, I thank you for your welcome comments today. I sure do hope this one wins in the contest. It is so cute and sweet. LUv, Andrea ps. it was really cool to see you try an etheree.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2011 6:04:00 PM

A wonderful write for the contest of the rescue Kashinath and much success in this one .. a sweet and sensitive write from the doggy point of view my friend.. thankxx for your many comments so warm and welcome on my poetry tonight..luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/25/2011 11:49:00 AM

cyphrecal musings sooo delirously done, kahinath! got more?? winning wishes in the contest!! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 10:15:00 PM

Hurry and give me another new one, Kashinath! Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/23/2011 10:21:00 AM

hi Kashinath! I've never tried this form before nor heard of it for that matter-- looks interesting and this sure is a sweet write from a dog's perspective-- maybe you'll do better with dogs ;) -- I sure hope so :) see you around ok? --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2011 9:09:00 AM

this is so sweet, Kashinath. "lick your wounds" is a great expression which you turned into something very neat here. Thanks for your comments to me today. "Captured" won me third place in an international sonnet contest so I am happy you saw that one. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/23/2011 5:51:00 AM

You made great use of the rictameter form to deliver quite a moving message, Kashinath. Great entry for Joyce's inspiring contest. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn