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If I were a different person, I’d give up a lot of my cursin’. My prospects would brighten, not worsen; If I were a different soul. If I had a penchant for money, I’d subsist on quenelles cooked with honey. My oceanfront view would be sunny; If I had a different goal. If I had a talent for fashion, I’d have closets to stash all my cache in. Top designers would worship my passion; If I played a different role. But all this conjecture is crazy. It’s not that I’m careless or lazy; An orchid won’t sprout from a daisy – I know what’s beyond my control. I accept that my limits arrest me; If I didn’t they may have distressed me. Still I try to put forward my best me; And I hope there’s enough to extol. Ilene Bauer (http://primetimerhyme.blogspot.com)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/17/2014 7:46:00 PM
Great Dynamic. :)
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Date: 5/17/2014 7:46:00 PM
I really like this write!! Bravo!!
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:42:00 AM
you make poets sound so cool to hang with.
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:20:00 PM
Ilene... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/13/2014 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, ilene
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Date: 7/22/2013 6:49:00 PM
congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/22/2013 2:14:00 PM
Congrats ilene. I missed this one somehow. Hmmm. :)
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Date: 7/22/2013 9:31:00 AM
With self awareness, and introspection, we can make sense of who we are....well done, Ilene!
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Date: 7/22/2013 7:06:00 AM
Ilene congratulations on your outstanding rhyme. Well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:15:00 PM
Awesome poem, awesome win, Ilene! Congratulations! : )Annalise
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Date: 7/21/2013 7:31:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... :-) nice entry, for Anne's any poem contest. always & forever ** LINDA
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Date: 7/21/2013 4:29:00 PM
Well look at Ilene taking the #1 spot!...What a brilliant rhyme scheme...never seen it before...Much insight and wisdom on display here and your style is unmistakable - Tim
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Date: 7/21/2013 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved top placement, Ilene. I always enjoy your rhythm-and-rhyme style. Well done. Licia :-)
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Date: 7/21/2013 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations Ilene. Well done. i enjoyed. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2013 12:22:00 PM
Great win, Ilene. You raised the bar just a little too high for this old poet/songwriter. Well deserved and I'm loving seeing you on top....hugs and much love.... Jake
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Date: 7/21/2013 11:01:00 AM
Ilene, congratulations on your first place win with this gem ;) Wilma
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Date: 2/28/2013 6:40:00 PM
Congrats, Ilene. Excellent. Well done. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 2/28/2013 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations :) I enjoyed reading your poem
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Date: 2/27/2013 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations Ilene i think we see your best you luv and we like it xx
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Date: 2/26/2013 8:54:00 PM
Ilene.. CONGRATULATIONS, with this awesome poem about YOU :-) LINDA
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Date: 5/20/2011 8:16:00 AM
An entertaining write, with a nice rhyming pattern.
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