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Below is the poem entitled Idiot which was written by poet Black Eyed Susan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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You’re an idiot – 
Can’t you see
That what you write isn’t poetry? 
Why aren’t you embarrassed?
How can you be pleased?
Your poetry’s the snot  
Blown out of a sneeze
An ooey gooey booger
You want me to read

Your poems are so bad
I can’t read past the first line
Without going MAD

Get them out of here
Your poems aren’t a gift -
In fact I will tell you
The truth and it’s this:
Your poems are just steaming
Piles of S H I T …

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  1. Date: 6/30/2014 3:55:00 PM
    Hehehehe, Black Eyed Susan, you're the best! You scored highly in all places with this gem! Thanks for putting it all out there in the right terms! Love it!

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 10:04:00 PM
    susan, I see tim really liked this one, and I DO TOO. Big congrats to you. HOpe to hear from you soon. My hotmail was kind of dry today!!!

  1. Date: 4/18/2014 8:11:00 PM
    Ouch. Nasty! Quite a slam dunk there, giving someone a big Black Eyed Susan. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/18/2014 6:31:00 PM
    Ha....I love your jib Susan...You'd fit in with my friends perfectly..We have something we call "Slander Sunday" where we can rant, rave, cut up and slam each other with no repercussions on Sundays.....perfect Tim....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 4/18/2014 4:03:00 PM
    Haha back here again, Susan, lol... you got to tell me who's this slamming... congratulations... ... By the way I have something to say to all who supported my ANY POEM # 19 contest. Shame on me, Shame on me! Please forgive me, for not taking the time, to CONGRATULATE and adore all the winning poems for a second or third time. I AM VERY LATE:(-- I was a little mad at the world. However, this is my winning list, I will give everyone the same love and support. I'm dropping by with a Copy Paste note from the bottom of my heart. I am sorry, it's not like me, to walk away, as if nothing. Truly, I appreciate every winning poem, and HM. LOVE LINDA

  1. Date: 4/17/2014 8:18:00 AM
    whew!! ,,this is heavy... this is great!!! I wish I have a power to express myself this way on earth!!!'re the only one, Sue!!! ..Congratulations!!! :O)

  1. Date: 4/17/2014 7:52:00 AM
    Game, set and match... for you and not for the "YOU" in this awesome rhyme Dutch Congrats and Greetings Elly

  1. Date: 4/17/2014 7:36:00 AM
    Good one. Tell it like it is... Love it

  1. Date: 4/10/2014 8:55:00 PM
    hahaha. I know where this Is coming from and I see you found a way to let off steam. Love it, susan.