Ice King

The numbness started at my finger tips As a feeling of power engulfed my body Feeling no pain from the ice Gives one the feeling of being invinceable My conclusion after holding the ice till it melted.........How do you defeat an opponent who feels no pain Richard Ferry

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2013 12:11:00 AM

'richard, I was going thru this winner's list and seeing you were on it. I am happy about that, but I have to tell you, this was probably my favorite in the whole contest. I just loved your ending on this one. Congrats!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2013 12:53:00 PM

Holding that ice cube was painful..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2013 4:57:00 PM

Richard, , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2013 2:19:00 PM

- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win,Richard! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 8/19/2013 2:04:00 PM

HELLO RICHARD, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/3/2013 3:08:00 AM

very well done ,,, as Andrea said ;}

Richard Ferry
Date: 8/4/2013 12:39:00 PM

Thanks Debbie for the visit

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2013 12:01:00 AM

hmmm, how did you feel numbness at your finger tips? Were you holding that ice in a fierce grip? I REALLY like how you related your experience to the opponent who feels no pain. Brilliant. (to follow the contest rules, you need to put a short note at the bottom telling us what you did) But it's kinda neat the way you combined your poem with that assignment she gave us to put at the bottom of the poem. Your poem serves as BOTH.

Richard Ferry
Date: 7/26/2013 2:35:00 AM

Andrea ..You are the champ when it comes to Soup contests. Appreciate the imput. Obviously, you are very competitive and talented. Quite sure ,you will be on the top of the list as long as you want to be. ..