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This poem was composed with the inspiration of my dearest friend and my dearest sister's sister, Skat. 

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Ice King

from parents' great love Blizz was born with warmest heart conquers cold and dark he wasn’t suckled he loved iced pacifier no baby’s bottle ice vies.. throbs his grips… numbs, writhes…never out of breath strengths spewed…crowned “Ice King."
July 22,2013 1.16pm Note: After eating an ice cream from my fridge, I took an "ice cube" and had it melted on my palm. The coldness bit; but, as I gripped, I’d reverie. ;)). The output now is expressed in my poem. I’ve never tried an epic poem before because it’s quite difficult for me; but, I’m trying. I hope I’ve understood and followed the instruction which is haiku count (or is it form?). I hope you’ll enjoy my experimental poem. Thank you sooo much! Have a great day! First Place Contest: Ice King (in epic, only in less than 10 lines for adventure one) Judged: 8/19/2013 Sponsor: Poet Skat

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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 4:58:00 PM
    wow, it's morning there already. seems as if it was night just hours ago.... I hope you enjoy your day and school my sis.... read this one last night. need a new one...hahaha.. I will post a new poem as soon as inspiration hits me... thank u for stopping by.....hugs and love....always a BBF....Linda

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 8:40:00 AM
    I'm waiting for your newest poem. Hi I'm back:-). Had to cut my comment short. I had to answer an order from a customer. I came by to re-read your ice king. My dearest sis. I know you will do well. I love this icy cold epci poem... ...xox.. love you, your sis.. Linda

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Red bull... an energy drink... weeeeeeeeeee... and boy do i have lots of it.. I don't drink them usually.. But, today is Friday. and I have to be quick on my orders. and so far so good. I'm doing my orders and bothering soup poets after ending my short food orders... thanks for the quick hello. I was happy i got your message box while you were on line.. xoxoxoxoox...Linda

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 11:47:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Uniquely creative and you..Sara

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 12:09:00 AM
    Leonora, I wanted to come congratulate you on this win here. I still can't believe you got "reverie" out of this painful experience. You have the sunniest disposition ever!!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:43:00 AM
    Powerful Leonora! Really enjoyed this one--Congrats!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Outstanding! glad to see you at the top of the list. Hugs Rick

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:49:00 PM
    sweet sis. I'm glad this is a number one poem. congratulations on your winning poem... love always~ PD

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:38:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Leonora

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:07:00 PM
    - It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Leonora! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:56:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS, Leonora ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 12:09:00 AM
    mmmm did you say ice cream. .. stopping by this chiller once again. thank you for enjoying my poems. I wanted to say good night. going to bed...finally my sweetest sis... luv luv...linda

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 1:42:00 AM
    So beautifully pictured

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 6:08:00 PM
    Hi Leonora, I wrote another Ice King poem that qualifies for the contest.

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Hello my dearest sis... how are you... thank you for the lovely comment, and making my morning even sweeter. I won't be much on line today. maybe till the morrow. I kind of got a headache. I will send you hugs before your day starts.. unless your day is over already... it's almost noon here. sending you hugs... love... your #1 fan and poet sis.... Linda

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 7:22:00 AM
    Leonora, neither of us truly did haiku with our haiku form used on ice king, but we got the syllable count right!! I enjoyed the story you produced from your imagery. I couldn't get past the experiment stage to make an epic out of the mere short lines of haiku!! But the assignment WAS to do epic poetry from haiku form and I think you fulfilled the challenge of the contest as best you could!!

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 3:00:00 PM
    Well I see Andrea is not the only 1 doing these experimentations Leonora , L O L..' I sure hope you get a high spot with this crystalline effort wishing you well, Joe..)

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 7:29:00 AM
    Good morning, I modified my Ice king poem. Please let me know what you think.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:08:00 PM
    hey! You call this an experiment; it is exquisite please do try some more on this grounds of epic you are really great at it. LUV............Henshaw

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 12:53:00 PM
    Hi! my friend, I have too no idea to write epic poem. Here, you have done wonderfully, I feel. I have enjoyed your magic. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl