This poem was composed with the inspiration of my dearest friend and my dearest sister's sister, Skat.
from parents' great love Blizz was born with warmest heart conquers cold and dark he wasn’t suckled he loved iced pacifier no baby’s bottle ice vies.. throbs his grips… numbs, writhes…never out of breath strengths spewed…crowned “Ice King." July 22,2013 1.16pm Note: After eating an ice cream from my fridge, I took an "ice cube" and had it melted on my palm. The coldness bit; but, as I gripped, I’d reverie. ;)). The output now is expressed in my poem. I’ve never tried an epic poem before because it’s quite difficult for me; but, I’m trying. I hope I’ve understood and followed the instruction which is haiku count (or is it form?). I hope you’ll enjoy my experimental poem. Thank you sooo much! Have a great day! First Place Contest: Ice King (in epic, only in less than 10 lines for adventure one) Judged: 8/19/2013 Sponsor: Poet Skat
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