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i wonder

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i wonder

i wonder when the vultures feast,
do they hope for their next meal?

i wonder when lions feed on
what their harem provide,
do they feel proud,or just loved?

i wonder when frogs
gave up swimming
and try leaping for better ponds:
do they look inside the water
to see their new green skin?

i wonder what we have
that animals don't.
we have nothing,friends,
nothing new.
we have old things in new images,
and communicated in such a way
we forget the ways silence connect.

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  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:00:00 AM
    A moment of silence is yours right now xxx

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:06:00 AM
    "Awesome poem"

    Mr Avatar Hsu Mr
    Date: 8/29/2013 4:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 10:55:00 AM
    At times, it does wonders to actually wonder about the other creatures, from their perspective. I think we will learn a lot from them. A thought-provoking write. Mr. Hsu. I especially liked the one about the frogs... thanks for passing by my non-poem. That was just me, thinking aloud. Wondering the cause of the spike in my views. I just found it super odd, that's all. And I see some other Soupers have had the same experience, so maybe it is a glitch?

    Mr Avatar Hsu Mr
    Date: 8/29/2013 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you and hi there :) I read some of your poems and really like some of the images you used. I have not had that happened to me but sometimes the site hangs me when i am scrolling down poems. Maybe you can write a poem about the glitch :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 10:33:00 AM
    a lot of good things to wonder about and now you have me wondering these same things... nice one :)

    Mr Avatar Hsu Mr
    Date: 8/29/2013 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :) It's good to wonder.