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I Wonder

Sometimes I wonder were you are; were you might be. I wonder if it is possible for you to still think about me. I wonder if you'll love me forever, like we promised to; or if that all faded the day I lost you. I wonder if I'll ever see you again, my husband, lover and best friend. I wonder alot of things; but most of all, I wonder why you; why you at all.

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Mary Duhart

Date: 1/18/2009 6:03:00 AM

Life's decisions sometimes does leave us with many questions. It's during these times when I know I can't fix it I leave it in the hands of the Lord. He has all the answers. Great write.

Abraham L

Date: 1/18/2009 3:10:00 AM

Hello vanessa, from reading your poems it seems as though you have lost your husband, let me extend sympathy greetings, and just to clarify on the first comment, before i read this one. i thought you was just talking in general regarding the bad things that goes on in the world today. those comments was not to judge or make you feel bad in anyway. you are expressing your feelings very well i must say. great poetry

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/14/2009 3:03:00 AM

Nice poem Vanessa and welcome to Poetry Soup. I invite you to read some of my work...Raul

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/13/2009 10:49:00 AM

Hope love finds you because you sure found me with these words of love. enjoyed reading and have a great day. dont forget to check out my poem The chocolate chip conspiracy.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2009 7:54:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Vanessa. I hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol

Laurie Ginn

Date: 1/13/2009 5:54:00 AM

Vanessa your writing pierces the heart. Very good job and conveying your emotions. Laurie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/13/2009 4:38:00 AM

This is heartbreaking and filled with love at the sametime. I love the voice in this piece that speaks with such love, longing, and devotion. The poem flows very welll. Well done!