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I Woke Today

I woke today only half the man I was yesterday Newtown still rings out, as the souls of the lost ring inside my head. I woke today......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/1/2013 2:24:00 PM
Michael , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD
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Date: 1/1/2013 9:27:00 AM
Returning to this one, The reason it is so good is because you said a LOT with few words. That is the sign of a good poet!
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Date: 12/28/2012 4:17:00 PM
Very sentimental poem Sir Michael about a very sad tragedy. very appropriate and right on.
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Michael Hornschuch
Date: 12/30/2012 11:40:00 AM
Jack, thank you....I've been off of here for quite a while, a friend asked me to write something regarding the incident. Living in Colorado, I've witnessed Columbine, and most recently aurora....hard to write a positive. I am going to ask one of our contest creator's how to post a poem someone shared with me on this topic. It's not mine, has the poets name and home state, but I don't know if I can post it with out fear of plagiarizing, or posting with out their permission...even if I acknowledge them Good to see a reply from you and look forward to reading more of your work :)
Date: 12/24/2012 5:34:00 AM
Good morning, Michael,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA
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Michael Hornschuch
Date: 12/26/2012 9:47:00 PM
Thank you, i don't write much anymore...seems my mind is slipping away....so I just come on when certain friends ask about my where a bouts! Hope you had a merry christmas, and....Have a blessed new year :)
Date: 12/23/2012 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM Michael xx
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Date: 12/22/2012 5:36:00 PM
wow,this is REALLY a good one about newtown. the refrain makes it! Congrats on the HM.
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Michael Hornschuch
Date: 12/26/2012 9:48:00 PM
thank you Andrea,

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