I Watched the Sun Rise

I watched the sun rise this morning In its splendorous shimmering gold Slowly drifting up - out of the earth Like a flower bud unfold Its pristine wings to heavenly things Radiating love sublime From deep within Where life begins And nothing ever dies In the atmosphere Where nothings clear As colors born in bloom I watched the sun rise this morning Dreaming about you And me again together like Two binary stars Trapped in a dance Of eternal romance Immeasurably, near and far… Thus, when I watch the sun once more Tomorrow or next year I’ll think again of where we’ve been And cry yet one more Tear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 4/20/2012 7:30:00 AM
Your verse is always wonderful to read Terry. It exudes color, magical images and emotions that move me. I'm celebrating your inspiration.
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Date: 4/16/2012 6:22:00 PM
i like this poem very much. it reads beautifully and is very touching. nice one!
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Date: 4/16/2012 3:13:00 PM
I like the image of being trapped in a dance... where nothing ever dies...enjoyed,,your poem,.,,pd
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Date: 4/16/2012 3:03:00 PM
This is a Wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it today, it verses were so alive and vibrant, each a good description of each detail, especially the verses Two binar stars Trapped in a dance of eternal romance. Good write!
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