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I Was At a Park At Night

I was at a park at night And I thought of you As the sky grew darker and darker And the air grew colder and colder Because those are the only two adjectives I could think of to describe your heart Which was weighing heavy on my mind During my view of the park at night

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Date: 7/21/2011 11:32:00 AM
You seem to have been "hurt" by someone and that comes through in this poem. Let me know what you think of my recent efforts
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Date: 7/17/2011 11:52:00 AM
Very nice write.
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