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I the Wall

Secrets one may hide
within me, those of your life...
I will never tell.

© Harry J Horsman  2012

inspirationalpersonification

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/22/2019 9:54:00 PM

I was intrigued with the beauty of your personification's brevity and fascinated by your poem's beautiful intrigue. Love the title. Congratulations, Harry, on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 10/5/2012 4:49:00 PM

love this poem sandy

Linda Barr

Date: 9/24/2012 5:18:00 PM

Mystery is the strength of love. Thanks for the review.

Jay Loveless

Date: 9/16/2012 8:15:00 AM

Stories written on your skin, Drawn and etched into your hide, Told and cried throughout the night.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/16/2012 3:07:00 AM

Takes two to have this solidarity of trust. A stalwart message to a friend. Succinct, Harry.

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/15/2012 3:58:00 PM

What a delightfully profound and clever poem my friend! Kudos, Jack

Jack Horne

Date: 9/15/2012 2:52:00 PM

love this clever write, Harry

Len Gasun

Date: 9/15/2012 1:44:00 AM

so profound but you've vividly picture the wall in your few words, harry!!! brilliant! ilove it! thanks for stopping by reading my work and especially for shopping in my poetry dept. store! so, that given freely away to you needs a replacement,LOL. just kidding! Thank you so much. Good luck and best wishes for your big win my dear friend :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2012 3:04:00 PM

You have a whole wall to write on ...... Few words can say so much. Have a lovely Friday afternoon. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/14/2012 12:27:00 PM

Trust you Harry to say so much with so little words.. Love this, hope your weekend will be a great one ;) love Wilma

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/14/2012 12:10:00 PM

self explanatory! wonderful!

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/14/2012 6:47:00 AM

So few words, but so very accurate. So many secrets hidden within the walls. Glad mine can't speak. Another excellent piece Harry

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/14/2012 5:41:00 AM

soupy x

Kash Poet

Date: 9/14/2012 1:46:00 AM

Very good personification in this short verse Harry.Enjoyed the read.

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/13/2012 10:59:00 PM

Walls don't have a mouth. They will never tell your secrets. Good write Harry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2012 10:18:00 PM

So much said in so few words. I had wanted to do one with this message too, Harry, and here you are saying it so perfectly with this senryu.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2012 3:10:00 PM

tremendous way to exude theme harry luv .. much said in few words so special .. good luck dear friend .

Robert Johnson

Date: 9/13/2012 3:09:00 PM

I Robot, I pod, I pad, now I the wall. :) I like it. Four walls are all that's keeping the ceiling from becoming the floor. If not, we would get trampled.

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/13/2012 12:23:00 PM

Hi! my sweet friend, you are not the wall but the faithful man of sweet secrets. Excellent personification. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/13/2012 10:11:00 AM

ooh like it, just think of all those secrets behind all those walls, gosh the mind boggles xx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/13/2012 10:11:00 AM

like the new look...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/13/2012 10:06:00 AM

such mystery you provide me with, harry!.. this is intrinsically wired!.. winning wishes and huggs!..:)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/13/2012 10:00:00 AM

Beautiful, simply beautiful write Harry! There are some interesting secrets that the walls in my house holds I'm sure! And these walls sure aren't talking to tell them either, ha ha! Great Work!!