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I The Wall

Secrets one may hide
within me, those of your life...
I will never tell.

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  1. Date: 10/5/2012 4:49:00 PM
    love this poem sandy

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 5:18:00 PM
    Mystery is the strength of love. Thanks for the review.

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 8:15:00 AM
    Stories written on your skin, Drawn and etched into your hide, Told and cried throughout the night.

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 5:27:00 AM
    So much said with such few words. an insightful write on the theme of the contest. Very well penned and thank you for stopping by.

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 3:07:00 AM
    Takes two to have this solidarity of trust. A stalwart message to a friend. Succinct, Harry.

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 3:58:00 PM
    What a delightfully profound and clever poem my friend! Kudos, Jack

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 2:52:00 PM
    love this clever write, Harry

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 1:44:00 AM
    so profound but you've vividly picture the wall in your few words, harry!!! brilliant! ilove it! thanks for stopping by reading my work and especially for shopping in my poetry dept. store! so, that given freely away to you needs a replacement,LOL. just kidding! Thank you so much. Good luck and best wishes for your big win my dear friend :) hugs

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 3:04:00 PM
    You have a whole wall to write on ...... Few words can say so much. Have a lovely Friday afternoon. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Trust you Harry to say so much with so little words.. Love this, hope your weekend will be a great one ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:10:00 PM
    self explanatory! wonderful!

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 6:47:00 AM
    So few words, but so very accurate. So many secrets hidden within the walls. Glad mine can't speak. Another excellent piece Harry

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 5:41:00 AM
    soupy x

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 1:46:00 AM
    Very good personification in this short verse Harry.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:59:00 PM
    Walls don't have a mouth. They will never tell your secrets. Good write Harry.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:18:00 PM
    So much said in so few words. I had wanted to do one with this message too, Harry, and here you are saying it so perfectly with this senryu.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 3:10:00 PM
    tremendous way to exude theme harry luv .. much said in few words so special .. good luck dear friend .

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 3:09:00 PM
    I Robot, I pod, I pad, now I the wall. :) I like it. Four walls are all that's keeping the ceiling from becoming the floor. If not, we would get trampled.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 12:23:00 PM
    Hi! my sweet friend, you are not the wall but the faithful man of sweet secrets. Excellent personification. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:11:00 AM
    ooh like it, just think of all those secrets behind all those walls, gosh the mind boggles xx

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