I Smiled

Days to night Nights to day Flowers Bloom And petals fall The sun does rise As the monsoons fall Twists and turns the roads we travel I smiled The mysteries unraveled

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2016 8:17:00 PM

wow, I love this one in all its simplicity. It speaks volumes. Glad I came back to your oldies today.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2016 10:38:00 PM

So kind of you, I kinda liked this one, so means a lot to me! Hugs!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/14/2013 7:07:00 PM

A nice easy flow with some sweet imagery, culminating in a cool rhyme! BRAVO Arthur!! Best wishes, Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/9/2016 10:55:00 PM

I appreciate the gesture Arthur... better now than never!!! Keith

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2016 10:39:00 PM

I suppose being 3 years late to say thank you is a long time, but better late than never! :)

Red Omara

Date: 3/3/2013 4:13:00 AM

Love whimsical little verses like this. Nicely done.

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/24/2013 6:44:00 AM

The mysteries of life are often sort, but when are known, not what you thought. ...Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2016 10:39:00 PM

Thank you!

Lillie Williams

Date: 2/19/2013 11:46:00 PM

Excellent, very nice!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/10/2013 7:54:00 AM

keep smiling to eaxh mystery of life..Its nice to live and breathe.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/9/2016 10:40:00 PM

Thank you, am I late? ok just by a few years!!!! Hugs!

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/9/2013 11:23:00 PM

Nice read ... Seren