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i smile as i see this beauty over me

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i smile as i see this beauty over me

what makes me happy
is just laying
laying on an open field
and feeling free
as i see
the birds above me spread their wings 
and fly right over me
what makes me smile are the crickets
just hearing them sing their extravagant songs
and how with them its never wrong
so i can just sing along
and close my eyes and imagine me flying
flying so high no one can touch me 
no one can hurt me
no one can see me
and escape all my troubles 
just by observing natures unpredictable ways

i like to run out in the poring rain
and swirl around, as i look up to see
bright stars shining over me
which leave me speechless!

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  1. Date: 12/20/2011 12:59:00 PM
    "laying on an open field and feeling free" Yes I do that sometimes, Cool... Congrats on your worthy poem win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 1:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. Love it x

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 9:21:00 PM
    A beautiful picture, Aleksandra. Congrats on your win. Merry Christmas. Kim

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 8:15:00 PM
    Not quite speechless. You said it very well. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 3:58:00 PM
    this is very nice and you being happy by these simple beauties of nature. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 2:27:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in my "Being Happy" contest Aleksandra. I have enjoyed sponsoring contests this year and hope to continue doing it in 2012. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 1:16:00 PM
    I am speechless - this is beautiful!!!