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I See You

I see you 
insides twisting
heart racing
everything spirals out of control.
Jealousy spews its
emerald poison through
my heightened veins.
Longing and loathing
are equal partners in
my extreme discomfort.
It's not hate - 
not quite - 
but an aversion that seems
to know no bounds.
The sight of your
face fills me with
maybe just a little
Desire for friendship
for your attention
for your approval.
In the hopes that it might
calm the tumultuous churning
of my soul.
I yearn for peace that
seems so hard to grasp;
to best you, to be you
either way I want to 
conquer you 
so you can no longer flaunt
your existance
over my meager self.

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  1. Date: 9/17/2010 12:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on this win with nice write, T.L.

  1. Date: 9/14/2010 7:14:00 PM
    wow, powerful, intense, Super!! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/14/2010 4:43:00 AM
    Wow-- what an emotion packed write, T.L. :)-- congrats on your major win!! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2010 10:38:00 PM
    Excellent pace! Congratulations on your big 1st place win with your most splendid entry! Most enjoyed reading it~Chris

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 12:57:00 PM
    Congrats on your first place win in the Word Hurl contest.. an awesome write and super victory..with luv.. enjoy..

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 11:12:00 AM
    Congratulations T.L. on your win in Farah Chamma's contest "Word Hurl". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 6:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win :) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 7:32:00 PM
    Thank-you so much everyone! I am so happy :-) I don't think I've ever had such an honour before, it made my whole day!

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 6:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this contrastinn write...regards..rinki

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 6:08:00 PM
    Congratulations on your outstanding winning poem! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 5:38:00 PM
    congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 5:29:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning T.L. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I look forward to reading more of your poetry when I return. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol