I Remember When I Could Fly


I remember…
’till I was almost 25       those special nights
When I knew I could fly               not just pretending
                                                                          I’m sailing the skies
I remember                        when I could fly

I knew the sequence
When my countdown hushed to one            the gates would open
                                                         And my night flight had begun
 
Across my memories
                                                 My journey blocked the Sun                              
touchdown was real
                          I met the Chosen One
I remember                         when I could fly

I look back now
                           And I remember the wind             that sweet uplifting
                                                         Of a very special friend
He never leaves me        though human I've become
     sending me angels                         when goodness I flee from
I remember                        when I could fly

As I grow older
                                           I dream about those nights
                          Can’t seem to sequence                       no countdown in sight
      I pray my memories                                won't leave me in the night
                    'till I fold my wings                                             and drift into the light
I remember                        when I could fly


                           I remember


                                                      ...when I could fly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/25/2010 6:34:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Jimbo. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2010 2:47:00 AM
had to read this three times as just found it so uplifting loved it love it ... sarah x
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:56:00 PM
Your words fly right across the page.. nice. Bg
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Date: 6/24/2010 4:46:00 PM
very nice, Have a nice night...dream of flying.
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Date: 6/24/2010 4:34:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I too remember when I could fly but it was quite different...Great write..Good luck with this write that should be in the winner's circle..Sara
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