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I Never Saw It Coming

I never saw it coming It just crept up unawares Probably this morning Whilst I was still upstairs I thought I caught a glimpse As I had my tea and toast For just a fleeting moment Like a phantom or a ghost It was later that it hit me And the feeling left me cold I realised that suddenly I’d gotten bloody old Looking in the mirror For reflections never lie I saw a total stranger And he looked me in the eye Reflecting on the image And all that I could see Sadly I concluded That this, was really me ……………………………….......I never saw it coming © John W Fenn 20-08-2009

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Date: 9/1/2009 4:24:00 PM
Nice Write, Loved It, Always Cherica Lynn <3
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:04:00 PM
This is so realistic, and scary in a way, I am almost 20 which is half way to 40! I think about getting old all the time haha
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Date: 8/20/2009 2:43:00 PM
I really like this one. Age has a way of catching up with us. Keep writing. Sara
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