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I Never Knew

The battle was won It was over and done The victory is you But I never knew The tears were wept Darkness came and crept It dragged life through But I never knew No emotion in your eyes Always showing hidden lies It was always all just untrue But I never knew All could see the hurt shows Did you know everybody knows? It never came and hit me out of the blue But I never knew Tell me, was it worth going through? Because I was the one who never knew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/20/2010 2:39:00 AM
I loved your poem chriss it had so much life and thought to it well done and keep up the great work :) Love kareena
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Date: 8/11/2010 8:24:00 AM
How sad that you were the last to learn of the deception, Chris. This happens so often to people with kind, sincere hearts and it can be very hurtful. I hope you find someone who returns your love and sincerity. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/11/2010 6:09:00 AM
Excellent write, deepest feelings exposed.. ~ Wilma
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Date: 8/11/2010 5:22:00 AM
Very nice write on deep feelings, Chris
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Date: 8/11/2010 1:14:00 AM
excellent poem this, deepest of feeling. Harry
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