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I Made a Wish - a Waltz Wave

A shooting star fell from the sky. I closed my eyes and made a wish. I wished for true love to find me, embrace me, own me. Wonder of wonders my wish came true. 2/18/2013

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Date: 6/10/2015 7:23:00 AM
Kim, oh your waltzing wave is so pretty and dreamy, lovely wave, a beautiful example for your contest, 7
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Date: 3/24/2013 2:46:00 PM
this is fantastic , Kim!! a lovely little poem. I see you have not posted so many lately. Hope to see a lot more from you.
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Date: 2/19/2013 4:57:00 PM
I like that your waltz wave had a happy ending.... so far my wish is yet to be granted...ever hopeful. I like this form..thanks for the introduction to it !!
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Date: 2/19/2013 2:09:00 PM
Your wish came true, I am so happy for you! Excellent! High marks!
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Date: 2/19/2013 12:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today..Very creative way to go with the topic..Thanks for stopping by..Your review was very uplifting.Sara
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Date: 2/18/2013 8:47:00 PM
Some times dreams do come true, Kim! Enjoy your week! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2013 5:30:00 PM
Lucky you
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Date: 2/18/2013 5:09:00 PM
delightful write Kim....best wishes
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