I Love U

Your love is so full of passion n innocence, 
and the words like im lost in pain.
I just got lost in the breeze, 
the breeze of your love,
its like flowers blooming in spring.
I juz sat still waiting for you,
waiting for the time to stop,
I just couldn't wonder what were you,
Just another girl or an angel frm d star.
But one thing's true , that i love you,
for the breeze and the warmth you give.
And hearing my cries, one day you
stop for me with the time,
I can never forget the time you saw me,
with those eyes full of love,
It was so innocent n full of pain,
It made me cry, like a thundering rain,
Tat it melt ma heart with all those chains,
Clinging to stop me from meeting you,
I can't stop now, loving you,
I don't really know what it is, 
but it feels so romantic n true.
People here, people there,
call these words as poems,
but i would say that everyone
has a  poet hiding in them.
I finish my words with some love and care
A really amazing love affair,
I look at you with despair.
Why don't you be ma pair?
I love u so much,
I want to be with you,
I desperately am in need of you,
that now i know that the girl of my dreams
Is really you.

LOVE U AMANDA MILLER!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/31/2011 7:31:00 AM
thnx ppl!!
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Date: 12/30/2011 4:19:00 AM
Sanjay welcome to the soup, Amanda is a very lucky girl..David
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Date: 12/29/2011 12:58:00 PM
That is the most beautiful thing anyone has ever done for me ... And i beg ur forgiveness fr asking fr ur patience wi me ....for ur love beautiful words n frenship i thank u always n forever Love always Amanda miller
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Date: 12/29/2011 1:02:00 PM
i will wait for a lyf time ... i juz want u to be mine forever!! n i mean completely mine!! im a dog na.. need more attention.. :) love u always..
Date: 12/29/2011 12:41:00 PM
thank you roopesh.. im actually not the poet type. but i really love that angel. she is a awesome poet. n i juz wanna say.. tat i will write more bout her better n better..
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Date: 12/29/2011 12:38:00 PM
I am sure that bhese words come directly from your heart Sanjay...... These words are saying about the feeling you are affected with. I am impressed with those words you have written "People here, people there, call these words as poems, but i would say that everyone has a poet hiding in them". I think that you have to write more so that you can show your talents in writing. I wish Amanda miller comes to you soon. With love Roopesh Krishna
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