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I Lost the Guy of My Dreams

You promised me forever, you broke the deal, you told me that you loved me was it ever real? I'm out of mind, I'm searching for love but i can't find I was outside in the dark, In a great park. Nobody was there So alone But I don't fear. I've been waiting for someone to come by But no one to see there Slowly i was bored and feeling sad and i started to cry. I walked alone in the in a silent road Talking alone with myself Why do life so difficult? My phone rang and i thought it was someone But oh no i needed a load. Fifty meters away,my phone vibrates again Oh my Ghost,whos this? My heart bump so fast I've seen the number and i offed my cellphone Cause it was the man who left me the pain. My Quote To The One Who Hurt Me The Most: Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a teardrop I hope you're happy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/16/2008 2:49:00 PM
I like this one. So telling. Keep up the good work!
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:16:00 PM
I love this poem...I know how you felt..
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:50:00 PM
I'm so sorry, my heart feels for you, this is such a great write, it really is. You have opened up your heart, amazing job. Hang in there :) ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:25:00 PM
the insight on this ... and i thought you were ignorant about these things. your growing up too fast. this one was very well writen. and i do mean very well. John H. Loving III
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:18:00 PM
I like your quote, anything dear enough to you will probably always cause tears.
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