I Liken Myself To a Dragonfly

I liken myself to a dragonfly Settling with papery rustle To briefly watch The world go by Then to flit away In a hurried hustle To settle anew And to anew espy To gaze about In wide-eyed wonder I try to take it all in Again…before I fly The wonder of water The sound of thunder I perceive through the eyes Of the dragonfly I hear the flowers Each and every one I taste the wind I absorb the sun Tis only human I am But in my mind I cause my form to morph… into another wondrous one I liken myself to a dragonfly With parchment wings And faceted eye The better to see All things that matter to me And fathom the scheme of the sky
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Date: 7/12/2012 4:09:00 PM
Awesome! Great imagination! Very rich in talent!
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 7/12/2012 7:12:00 PM
Donald It's readers like you that keep writers like me writing! We all need that input to feed our hungry egos. thanks for the input!
Date: 7/6/2012 10:05:00 PM
A fantastic write, David! I love the imagery and rhyme scheme. It flows beautifully. One for my faves! I can't wait to read more from you, and I thank you for your kind comments on my haiku today. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/5/2012 9:17:00 PM
wow, this is awesome work. I also like the way you made really small lines with the rhyme at the end of each small four-line stanza. Some great imagery, such as the parchment wings and faceted eye. A poem to enjoy MUCHO.
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