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I Left My Purse on the Chopper

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I Left My Purse on the Chopper

It is day number twenty-one.
I've been awake for a week, I think.
The ride in the chopper was fun...
But my hair never slept a wink!

I love how the Universe speaks.
The tap on the shoulder, a whisper
From angels who know time has ceased
Asleep, til her prince just kissed her!

A tragic event - I might die
But i woke up and everyone smiled.
The husband and kids by my side,
The Universe bearing a child.

The Doctors and Nurses from God,
Who helped me get back on the hopper,
Discharged me with twenty prescriptions,
But I left my purse on the chopper!!

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  1. Date: 10/24/2009 11:17:00 AM
    Very clever write here, Karen. Its been a very long time since you've posted here at the Soup!! Hope you return with more great writes and Happy Holidays to you and your family!

  1. Date: 6/7/2009 10:51:00 AM
    Having had a heart atack in 2004, I can feel your words... except for leaving my purse on the chopper, that is. I left it in the ambulance and my wife had to run it down for me. lol Another good un! Thanks... <><

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 12:22:00 AM
    Excellent and nice flow...Raul

  1. Date: 3/5/2009 3:48:00 PM
    hope your alright. i was just getting to knw you. john

  1. Date: 1/31/2009 7:12:00 PM
    Karen, I don't know whether to laugh or say, "Oh, dear Lord, are you alright??" I guess, both. Is this a true story? Do tell. Loved this bit of imaginative writing if it's not true. Blessings, Donna G.