I Just Wish I

I just wish I..., Could meet you eye to eye,
In all of this negitive, Never open and selective,
Oh please, Don't forget about me, 
Becuase I Can't forget you, That, I would never do,
Starting all over again, Has left me with not a freind, 
But a life partner, Let's take this even farther,
No negitive creation, Leaving us in fustration,
 Take your time, I will take mine,
Read your bible, Turns out it's pretty reliable,
We  should love God before ourselves, 
God will pick us up again if it fails, 
Maybe it don't sound like a good idea to you,
Just look at all the things we have been through,
You wonder why I'm leaving,
It was all for good reason.......

P.S.  I'll be back, I hate it where I'm at.

By: ScottS2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/2/2011 9:51:00 AM
Is there a new moon or what? Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Scott. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 3:27:00 PM
Be like Copernicus. Be willing to say that the Earth revolves around the Sun in spite of groupthink pressures. When you find truth, destroy it. If you can, then it wasn't worth anything to begin with. I see in this write that you are searching for what you need. No doubt you will find what you are looking for. This is a wonderful write.
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