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I Just Can'T Win

With all these struggles in my life And challenges of my days It feels as if I'm walking through a dark, cold, damp, cave I just want to shout i just want to scream I just can't win! Its just not fair! Can it be.. that my life has lead me, nowhere! I struggle as i wake each damn day I just can't get a break God help me get through this this isn't who i am Its just not my way so i just want to shout I just want to scream I just can't win! Its just not fair! And As i wake from my super who am i to think such things Get up, fight, Get on with your life But you don't have to scream its not what it seems Its all.... just......a dream contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/20/2012 1:57:00 PM
Someone wins and someone loses..... - Have a lovely weekend in sunshine and love Dina! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/19/2012 9:59:00 AM
The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and outstanding writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Dina. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2012 9:55:00 AM
Hi! this is good. I am glad that it is only a dream. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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