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I JUST CANT FORGET

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Below is the poem entitled I JUST CANT FORGET which was written by poet Reneice McDonald. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I JUST CANT FORGET

I can’t forget your smile, touch and tender ways.
I often tend to reflect on those glorious days.
Why did it have to end, i still can’t understand,
i just leave that in God's divine hand.

I can’t forget your kind words, sense of style and charm.
When we were together I feared no harm...
But why were you the one to hurt me?
Thought we would be together till eternity.

I can’t forget the love that was once true,
I’m now searching for new love and so are you
My heart bleeds in pain and deep regret...
I try, I try hard; but i just can’t forget.

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  1. Date: 12/25/2011 6:37:00 PM
    sista you feel the deep hurt feelings of a lost love. Everything that you said I felt, but with a guy who already had someone

    McDonald Avatar Reneice McDonald
    Date: 12/25/2011 8:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    just writing from my heart, it makes me stronger.
  1. Date: 12/18/2011 11:18:00 AM
    Which contests are full? If you need help just ask your questions in soup mail to me or in my blog Rene, glad to help always, welcome to Soup! [Just a note if you use all CAPS it is like HOLLERING at your reader..only capitalize for emphasis or for proper nouns or the first word in sentence ;)] Light & Love

    McDonald Avatar Reneice McDonald
    Date: 12/18/2011 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie. I'm just getting the hang of things here. Thanks for the advice.:-)
  1. Date: 12/18/2011 10:48:00 AM
    Such a write from a deep place in your heart. Poetry has been a great place for me to share my life and dreams along with my past. Another good write my poet friend. Always with a smile. Michael

    McDonald Avatar Reneice McDonald
    Date: 12/18/2011 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Michael. Words come easily when I write about my real life experiences, but I'm also writing to enter contests here. Thanks for being a faithful reader of my poems.