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I hate giving things titlesssssssssssss

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I hate giving things titlesssssssssssss

I hold my sides wearily
pondering the lengths and strides I still have to take until I am authentic
My lies have become piled so high.... I have a lot of damage repair to do before this struggle 
is through. 

Afraid to expose the vulnerable
I stare in confusion in front of the looking mirror, trying to distinguish where exactly it was 
where my smile 
Lay down, gave up and died.

Weakened from my mind's inner war zone turmoil
Your compliments are cynical shrapnel to my confidence
Rebellious relentless disbelieving that I am what I know I am unique and 
I walk an unsteady line
tight rope of apprehensiveness
I want to let my hair down and just breathe..listen to the drip drop of a waterfall and sleep.
I remind myself to Speak with Conviction
I know
I am no longer powerless
dependent on desperately trying to win your approval, you will never be affectionate
I will not be Subservient or put myself at risk for the harms way of that subjection
Impotent of love you were feeble and weak, feeding on my youth and purity.

I resurrected my heart with the my rocket fuel beating life back into my chest.
It's a combination of
Passion, devotion, infatuation and a couple of years worth of
Tears, and sweat
It's a metronome of my steadiness
Invigorated from my second chance
Defiant to self doubt
I valiantly confront challenges that used to make me shake in my converse shoes.

Copyright © laura Hew

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  1. Date: 3/3/2011 1:19:00 PM
    Ohhh I LOVE titling things LOL..Ok how about The Metronome! very mysterious! Break your lines up a bit more & your all set. Let me know if you need more title help! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 3:56:00 PM
    Interesting write that you have penned..I like the lines I walk a tightrope of apprehensiveness unconfident and then I valiantly confront challenges that used to make me shake in my converse shoes..Sara

  1. Date: 6/29/2010 11:11:00 PM
    Very powerful. The things we sacrifice for approval. Very meaningful.

  1. Date: 6/23/2010 3:45:00 AM
    Very witty thoughts on hating to give titles