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I Fell Into My Grave While You Watched

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I Fell Into My Grave While You Watched

I Fell Into My Grave While You Watched

To fall down into the endless abyss
Your staying to watch me as I drift away from the world I once knew
What am I doing I losing control I'm going without word
Why do you watch from afar laughing as though my pain is some pleasure?
Is this the end of me? shall I die here ?
Why is it you watch me why is it you do not save me.I see you watching with a smile.
I thought it was love maybe it was greed that made you push me down down into my grave.
You seem happy maybe it because I'm dead?Yes that it
I'm happy again I was feared death but now i see it as pleasure
Why are you crying can't you not see me smile your tears or vain to me
I'm smiling as I see you suffer you killed me and now your paying for it
Here you are now you can stay by my side forever
I'm happy even more since you came now we can float together in this endless void you created
I can see your back to your old none selfish self may we both smile more

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  1. Date: 8/9/2012 11:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Marcedies. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:28:00 PM
    Marcedies congrats on your win, love it...David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 8:43:00 AM
    Congrats on your wonderful win Marcedies

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:37:00 PM
    MARCEDIES :-) , this has been my favorite contest out of all the ones I have sponsored this year.. Congratulations and thank you for the double journey... good night... XOX~ PD

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 6:08:00 PM
    a soulful journey Mercedies...enjoyed your poem..always..Joseph

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 7:37:00 PM
    ahh, this one is quite good.. I can tell what you're talking about