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I Fell In Like With You

Inspired by one of my favorite bands, Rise Against, and the song is called, “Ever-changing” (Acoustic). Please listen to this song if you don’t know of it. It’s raw & powerful. “Have you ever been a part of something? That you thought would never end. But then, of course, it did.” –Rise Against “I fell in ‘Like’ with you” With her smile I melted unto oblivion’s redemption Candy coated perceptions, windows’ gap Seeping brilliance refreshment Uncertainty resolution, polished Absorbed into closeness sun Yet these eyes still…see Butterflies taking notice, missing you…as you stood in front of me Strong, yet soft legs Foundation of my face to rest upon Scars…fading A cremated sin Yet, elongated moments of silence Created abruption’s new face The face of change When she turned to me and said “I’m not sure, anymore” Emotional lullaby, rocking me to sleep New battles with spectral flashback Trying to get under my skin, a drunken tick facing demise Phoenix’s sunrise, rejuvenating my recycled defenses Yet, today, these rays just aren’t bright enough to burn sadness away And with these sounds of storm clouds & Fall on horizon’s breath These grounds are so familiar, yet bittersweet This heart doesn’t want to be enlightened by karma today It wants to be held for how it shines now Denied…distance wins again today Slavery whipped punishments in miles and blocks This must end Because I try to keep lines open to get a call from you Yet all I hear are booty calls with busy signals And yet something has kept me here too long But can they leave me, if I’m already gone? Something has kept me here too long Karma’s laughter But, through it all, I will shine … How I wish my mere presence can bring joy’s tear to her eye Sadly though, now, the lines are drawn Yet I wonder if this feeling is gone Have the best parts of this…come and gone? … Maybe I’ll never know the truth Perhaps she was misguided by jealousy’s deprivation Deteriorating heart’s splendor While I fell in “like” with her Perhaps “Better Man 2.0” appeared from Cloud 9’s fallacy While I fell in “like” with her Perhaps She held onto the past As I, drawn to waterfall’s edge Allowed myself To let go…and F A L L © Drake J. Eszes “We adore those who hurt us. Yet, we hurt those who adore us.” -Anonymous

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Date: 9/11/2015 4:52:00 PM
"Yet, today, these rays just aren’t bright enough to burn sadness away" - I love that line. It perfectly captures the aftermath of having your heart trampled on just a little. I think we have all been there and it is never easy.
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Date: 9/11/2015 4:59:00 PM
No, it's not (hee hee, I almost typed "it' snot" LOL). And it's reasons like THAT why we always overcome. Laughter through the pain. Togetherness through the rain. Remembering what/who truly matters at the end of the day. Thank you, so damn much, Heather.
Date: 8/9/2014 8:35:00 PM
"Butterflies taking notice, missing you…as you stood in front of me" -Really love that line! This entire poem was incredible. I had read it some time before, but I guess I didn't comment on it. I could feel the pain in this uniquely expressed poem. I also really like- "Yet, elongated moments of silence Created abruption’s new face"...I can just feel it going down, and it was a brilliant way to transition. Love this. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/10/2014 12:21:00 AM
Laura!!! :D Thank you so much! Yeah, this piece was triggered by a lot of emotions during a major crossroad in my life. You're awesome!
Date: 3/31/2014 3:16:00 PM
Nice. I like the way you expressed this. And thanks for your comments as well
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Date: 8/29/2013 5:15:00 PM
Another awesome write Drake,,, I did listen to the song as well. I don't think you can go back. Memories are always sweeter. ,,,,, glad you liked my Dawn ;}
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Date: 8/30/2013 12:46:00 AM
Yes, this is true. :) Thank you so much, Debbie.
Date: 8/7/2013 2:26:00 PM
falling in like is much safer than falling in love, Drake. I see that you had this one featured at Soup at one time. Big congrats for that. Loved the ending of this and the little quote you put with it.
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Date: 8/7/2013 2:41:00 PM
Yes, it is much safer. But, it still kinda hurts. =) Thank you so very much, Andrea!
Date: 6/26/2013 1:15:00 PM
Searching for something i fall in like to read : ) To.wish to see joy's tear on someone you like.. but instead you re the one ending in tears..of sadness.Life is like a circus and we oftenly end up the clowns..Sad painful emotions penned.Beautiful poem..but so sad to 'feel you' sad..but guess this is the past..Charma
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Date: 6/26/2013 1:31:00 PM
This is very much the past. :) You are spot on with your perspective on this. It is sad, for sure. Thank you so much, Charmaine! :)
Date: 5/20/2013 10:42:00 PM
... but we ran AWAAAYYY HEY!... now all my friends are gone! Maybe we've outgrown all the things that we once loved"... heck yes, another Rise Against fan! Anyway... onto the poem. I'll be honest, I'm not a typical fan of extremely abstract descriptions... but there's something about the way you write that makes me halfway change my mind about it. There seems to a be a cold neutrality in relationships these days... People settling for "like" instead of "love"... adding you to my fave poets list!
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Date: 5/20/2013 10:52:00 PM
YES!!!!!!!!! A beautiful thing! Yes, there is a much greater distorted definition between like & love. Same thing with "friendship" and just "knowing somebody". Many, many thanks, Tim!!!!!
Date: 9/15/2011 1:32:00 PM
Mesmerizing words that flow from your pen like water. Takes the reader deep into your mind where the dreamlike sequence is an enchanting experience.
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Date: 5/1/2011 7:49:00 AM
Hi Dalila, yes something along those lines. You just started this month? Spectacular! Thank you for coming by here. :)
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Date: 4/30/2011 10:00:00 PM
Dear Drake, Thank you on your comment of my poem: OF LOVE. It was inspired behind by someone who adores me. Now on this poem of yours, it seems you and your love separated and ended up not liking each other. I like the narrative-like part of your poem. Thank you again for reading my poems. I just started composing poems this April and I am totally immersed in it. Dalila
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:54:00 AM
Thank you kindly Carol!
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Drake. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 5:07:00 PM
Hi Karen & Linda, thank you both so very much!!! I had no idea until just now. Awesome!!! :)
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Date: 3/13/2011 5:03:00 PM
Congrats Drake on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all my friend with luv.. impressive...
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:37:00 PM
I like reading your poems gives me a different look at everyone's creativity
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Date: 2/28/2011 1:33:00 PM
Yes, for sure...thank you so much for stopping by Celene. I think your name is awesome, by the way.
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Date: 2/28/2011 12:53:00 PM
Sweet,romantic,yet so sad. .the letting go so hard. .enjoyed reading your poem,it stirs the soul and heart. .C.C
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Date: 11/28/2010 5:47:00 PM
@ P.D., lol that's cute. But, I was approaching it differently. A little more innocently, I guess is the word for it. Either way, I wanted to a walk a different path with this. I think it worked. =) Thank you so much!!! @ Nette, not for a contest. Just another something from the heart. =) Yes, every rose does...thank you kindly!
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:37:00 PM
I'm sorry but i smiled at the thought,, you can not come out and say it,,lol,, (( I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU )) your poem was awesome,..miss p.d.
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:46:00 AM
piercingly beautiful with images that pushes and pull.. roses, like love, have thorns.. unique from as well, drake... if this is for a contest, much luck to you! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/28/2010 7:55:00 AM
@ Michael, yes please do. But, be sure it's the Acoustical version...that's the epic version. Thank you kindly! =) @ Sara, neither have I. But the fact I thought of it...I just had to run with it. I was delighted to read it. It was damn good. Thank you very much for stopping by here. @ Dr. Ram, hard-hitting song isn't it? Thank you so much sir!
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Date: 11/28/2010 6:22:00 AM
I will check out the song , and this write is very very good....so ejoyed....Michael
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Date: 11/28/2010 5:15:00 AM
Welcome to soup...Never heard of a drunken tick..I was delighted that you stopped by to comment on my Haiku..Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:59:00 AM
I very much the song, Drake and nice adage at the end,
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:25:00 AM
I highly recommend checking it out on Youtube or just buying the track. It's a heart-breaking but eye-opening piece. Thank you so much, Wilma! Yeah, I'm diggin' the quote too. =)
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