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I Dream To Be Your Dream

I dream to become that dream which comes in your sleep kissing your soft mind and leaving your sleeping face ever glowing with bright smile. ========================= By:kashinath karmakar (11th Feb.2011)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2012 2:27:00 PM

guess what? I had faved this one twice by mistake, but I'll keep it that way. It deserves it!!!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 2/20/2011 1:33:00 PM

Quiet a nice tanka really enjoyed it.Thanks for the comment and the congrats.~LOTS OF LOVE~Teresa

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/20/2011 11:27:00 AM

such poetic words written for the contest,which shows love and deep emotion, dreams are suppose to be beautiful, and your dream definitely is outstandingly beautiful,,all the best,,and Thank you for visiting my words,,Blessings..Cecil

Sami Helbaoui

Date: 2/18/2011 10:51:00 AM

Do hope you the best in the contest cause this is Amaaazing! Love it, Sami

Diane Locksley

Date: 2/17/2011 3:42:00 PM

You can be my dream anytime kashinath. I like the romance in this poem. Good luck in the contest, Diane

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 2/16/2011 12:11:00 AM

very beautiful

Jasmine Winters

Date: 2/15/2011 5:42:00 PM

omg i loved it .... keep up the good work luv

Fabiyas M V

Date: 2/15/2011 2:17:00 AM

Hot dream indeed,Kashinath.Nicely penned.Wonderful entry for the contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2011 3:51:00 PM

OOO ! what a dream, Kas. Kar. ~mighty tastyyyy.. sure love it.. all it needs is a box of choclates.. .. take care,.. And have your self a happy Valentine Day,.. Linda

George Aul

Date: 2/14/2011 7:59:00 AM

Good luck in the contest...I like your Tanka........George

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2011 5:50:00 AM

Again I am enjoying these breathtaking lines on this special day of luv dear heart..wishing u a most Happy Valentine's Day with lots and lots of luv ..

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/13/2011 7:25:00 AM

a rare and wonderful occasion. John H Loving III

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/13/2011 4:43:00 AM

Kash, I love this, a pure delight to read this afternoon.. All the best for MJF's contest, love Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/13/2011 4:28:00 AM

kashi!! woohoo delight for valentine!! amazing, tender write.. go and win!! ;) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2011 11:12:00 PM

Hey, that is cool. Gert calls this one a Sentanka, it's extra special!

Diane Locksley

Date: 2/12/2011 10:55:00 AM

What a beautiful, romantic dream! Good luck in the contest kashinath. Best to you, Diane

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/12/2011 8:50:00 AM

Enjoyed the read of your nice "Sentanka" (I call this on a Sentanka because it is a Senryu combined with the form of a Tanka). Wish you best of siúccess in the contest, Kashinath!......Gert

Constance La France

Date: 2/11/2011 7:39:00 PM

a beautiful and lovely dream, I love it, and best of luck in the contest~~

James Tate

Date: 2/11/2011 5:55:00 PM

Great imagination, Kashinath.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/11/2011 12:49:00 PM

Nice write on the dream, kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2011 10:27:00 AM

What a lovely entry for the contest, Kashinath! You have such a loving heart. Best wishes for success, my friend. Your tanka made me smile. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2011 9:39:00 AM

In case I forgot to click on 7.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2011 9:38:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL, Kashinath. I hope this shoots to the top of the chart. (now I have to think of a wild and crazy one but I am trying to decide if he prefers actual dream or wish/dream type,like you have done.) Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/11/2011 8:37:00 AM

well smiles are definitely in order for this one, kashinath! wishing you the best in the contest :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2011 6:20:00 AM

Romantic words of emotion Kashinath my friend.. enjoyed your Tanka entry for Michael's contest.. much good luck.. a dream like this will want to be had by many ... bright smile is so warming luv..