I Dream In a Dream

(08/10/2011)

I dream in a dream
Where in my dream, I’m a perfect 
already
A perfect girl dreaming about her 
perfection
I don’t want to leave this 
imagination

I dream in a dream
In my dream of a dream, I’m 
untouchable
Where rain can’t wet my clothes 
Where winds can only beautifully 
wave my hair

I dream in a dream
While I'm  tight asleep hugged by 
blanket,
In my dream you sleep next to me
In this dream of a dream,
In your arms I look of course flawlessly 
pretty 

I dream in a dream
In my dream, you adore me so
In my dream of a dream, I’m your 
only one
In my sleeps, I repeat those 
gleaming memories,
In this two-stage dream,
You are mine, I am yours
*Aah* my brain is the best 
imaginations factory

For Frank H. 'DREAM' Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/14/2012 8:01:00 AM
This is a gem from you Dinda.It goes to my Favs.
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Date: 1/2/2012 5:06:00 AM
Great poem Dinda ..... "i dream and see a poet from east has risen" Love reading yours .... :)
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Date: 12/11/2011 8:08:00 PM
I'm in the mood of dreaming too and this dream in a dream you have is simply perfect. thank you for your kind words Dinda.... for bearing it for awhile with that piece.
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Date: 10/29/2011 11:00:00 AM
I had to come back to read this again :-) I love it! I dream in a dream..Aaaaahhhh.
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:07:00 AM
thank goodness for our imaginations! if we did't have fantasies to escape into...i wonder what we'd be like, how different we'd be. probably a very unhappy world. congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:05:00 PM
Very nice!.. :-)
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Date: 10/25/2011 11:34:00 AM
You ARE AN IMAGINATIVE WOMAN! I believe that there will be so many females who love this poem and dream right along with you...very nice write...I just got finished reading Elizabeth's Lullaby and now you have me dreaming in a dream...I am also untouchable...uh....I am getting sooooo verrrrrrry sleeeeepy! Luv, Gwendolen
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Date: 10/10/2011 11:12:00 AM
Your dream wraps up the fantasy perfectly.
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Date: 10/10/2011 7:23:00 AM
Congrats my dear poet and collab partner friend... I am so happy for you!!! with love and hugs Michael
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:30:00 PM
Congrats Dinda on an outstanding win with this dynamic entry luv... amazing lines of dream theme perfection...
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dinda
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Date: 10/8/2011 3:12:00 PM
nice poem dear,sounds like my fantasy poem..very similar...nice poem though
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Date: 10/8/2011 1:28:00 PM
beauty brain indeed! Dig the dreamy write, thanks! Happy days and blissful nites~N
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