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I Dream In a Dream

(08/10/2011) I dream in a dream Where in my dream, I’m a perfect already A perfect girl dreaming about her perfection I don’t want to leave this imagination I dream in a dream In my dream of a dream, I’m untouchable Where rain can’t wet my clothes Where winds can only beautifully wave my hair I dream in a dream While I'm tight asleep hugged by blanket, In my dream you sleep next to me In this dream of a dream, In your arms I look of course flawlessly pretty I dream in a dream In my dream, you adore me so In my dream of a dream, I’m your only one In my sleeps, I repeat those gleaming memories, In this two-stage dream, You are mine, I am yours *Aah* my brain is the best imaginations factory For Frank H. 'DREAM' Contest

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Date: 2/14/2012 8:01:00 AM
This is a gem from you Dinda.It goes to my Favs.
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Date: 1/2/2012 5:06:00 AM
Great poem Dinda ..... "i dream and see a poet from east has risen" Love reading yours .... :)
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Date: 12/11/2011 8:08:00 PM
I'm in the mood of dreaming too and this dream in a dream you have is simply perfect. thank you for your kind words Dinda.... for bearing it for awhile with that piece.
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Date: 10/29/2011 11:00:00 AM
I had to come back to read this again :-) I love it! I dream in a dream..Aaaaahhhh.
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Date: 10/27/2011 10:07:00 AM
thank goodness for our imaginations! if we did't have fantasies to escape into...i wonder what we'd be like, how different we'd be. probably a very unhappy world. congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:05:00 PM
Very nice!.. :-)
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Date: 10/25/2011 11:34:00 AM
You ARE AN IMAGINATIVE WOMAN! I believe that there will be so many females who love this poem and dream right along with you...very nice write...I just got finished reading Elizabeth's Lullaby and now you have me dreaming in a dream...I am also untouchable...uh....I am getting sooooo verrrrrrry sleeeeepy! Luv, Gwendolen
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Date: 10/10/2011 11:12:00 AM
Your dream wraps up the fantasy perfectly.
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Date: 10/10/2011 7:23:00 AM
Congrats my dear poet and collab partner friend... I am so happy for you!!! with love and hugs Michael
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:30:00 PM
Congrats Dinda on an outstanding win with this dynamic entry luv... amazing lines of dream theme perfection...
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dinda
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Date: 10/8/2011 3:12:00 PM
nice poem dear,sounds like my fantasy poem..very similar...nice poem though
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Date: 10/8/2011 1:28:00 PM
beauty brain indeed! Dig the dreamy write, thanks! Happy days and blissful nites~N
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