I Dont Know

Caught in the mix 
Tryin to figure out what this exactly is
Different 
That's fo sho
But yet again on this trolley goin down lifes road
I don't know
What's told is so simple compared to what cld be shown
Instead Its a lot becuz of the role
Posted like a telephone pole
Waiting to be played with my wires n bolts
But yet again I don't know
Can't keep what's not mine to own
In a world so cold
Mostly alone
Or company held by the unknown
But its different
Like we been here before but I don't know which way to go becuz these signs on this road are unclear n weather probed
Uff man 
I don't know
My body is trembling for the most from the host
But I'm not supposed to be invited to go 
Not supposed to patrol
not suppose to feel like wanting more fo sho
But again on this trolley on this road, must not be for me
But than again it cld I suppose
I don't know
I'm stuck until next time tho........Peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/4/2011 6:33:00 AM
ok - it's a style thing I personally don't like to see texting abreviations it can make things hard to understand, I got through it apart from "Uff" which will forever remain a mystery. You've painted some interesting images, I'm just not quite sure what you're saying here, clearly this is just my opinion, others will no doubt see it differently.
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