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I Could Have...

Upon the dusty shores I watched the calming waves of sea debauched. They seem to whisper in my ear then motioned me to venture near. Now had I known to swim not sink I could have held the salty drink. I drifted deeper into sea then felt my spirit wander free. I saw a phantom fierce and wet. His ghostly ship was sailing yet. The sea surged up, its laughter hard and caught the seaman off his guard. I felt the blow of pounding waves that pulled me deeper into caves. Above me, trackless waters grew then turned the sea a blacker blue! If only I had learned to float, I could have grabbed that raft or boat. The paling smile of sandy beach, grew far outside my grasp or reach. When doomed ships wreck when oceans flare, a ghost must turn the swells that scare, and sail them first with haunting kiss then cast the winds that howl and hiss. I dare you brave this unknown vast to see a specter raise her mast. Sea goers know who's at the helm. For it is I who ride the realm! But had I learned one swimming stroke, I could have wrote this as a joke!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/15/2009 10:59:00 AM
Nice work Celeste and congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 4/15/2009 10:06:00 AM
Ha! Interesting take on the ironic - If only one had done one thing - it could have turned out differently, and laughed about it in the end. Like many of the couplets. Congrats on being featured this week.
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Date: 4/14/2009 12:01:00 PM
Love it! Need I say more? Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
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Date: 4/14/2009 6:52:00 AM
Davey Jones himself couldn't have said it better. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 4/13/2009 8:40:00 AM
Congradulations on being featured this week...My poems have been featured a few times and this week as well-It is such a neat feeling....great poem-God Bless Rhonda Kay
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Date: 4/13/2009 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2009 6:14:00 AM
Congrats on being featured this week....Aleera
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Date: 12/5/2008 9:10:00 AM
WOW ... wonderful story here and most original in its perspective!! What a super writer you are Celeste!! Hope you enjoy it here at the Soup ... its been a wonderful site for me. May you and yours have a wonderful holiday!!
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:33:00 PM
Tales of the sea are my favorites. 30 years as a Navy Reservist I still have a love affair with the ocean. Vince
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Date: 12/2/2008 8:05:00 AM
Great rhyming story , Celeste ....
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