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i can see farther at night

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i can see farther at night

the sun and the moon
both shine there light
in the day there is one light
and at night there is more than the eye can see
in the day you see but days
at night you see billions of years

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  1. Date: 9/16/2009 7:32:00 PM
    Quite profound, John. Indeed, as we consider the extreme distance of the stars that light up the night sky, it is amazing we are able to view them. Very astute observation and the title is excellent too! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 4:30:00 AM
    Nice work...

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 4:06:00 AM
    I think it is called free verse technique but not sure. You open my eyes to more through this inspirational write. Sara