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I Bruise Easily

Don’t get too close I might shut you out, don’t talk bout love I might add more bricks to the chamber that shields my heart, The fragile foundations of my ability to love without fear can crumble at any moment the warning sign says fragile heart protected at all costs, I don’t love easy, for fear of being hurt, to unravel the minutiae of my heart you might leave me exposed, remember that I bruise easily, So be gentle with me, be gentle with this heart of mine …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/13/2010 9:05:00 PM
great title for this great poem. Are you a water sign? I am reading all sorts of things into people's poetry since I did that poem of mine on the elemens of the Zodiac. haha. SEe ya later, Alligator!
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Date: 8/13/2010 1:55:00 PM
good write and truth tells no lies
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:24:00 AM
No heart should get bruised, but they do Wilma. Sensitive piece >> James
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Date: 8/12/2010 6:00:00 PM
How sweet but cautious. Lovely reading this today. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 8/12/2010 2:49:00 PM
Great feeling shared here love... I can feel the passion and caution... always Michael
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Date: 8/12/2010 9:54:00 AM
Nice work! You describe a sensitive person quite well in this poem. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:13:00 AM
Nice!!!! Jimmy
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:44:00 AM
good one, much enjoyed
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:31:00 AM
warning signs!! I say nothing ventured nothing gained...
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Date: 8/12/2010 5:55:00 AM
I love the softness of this. It has a great, look at the fear of falling in love again after a broken heart. The sound of wanting love again, without the acceptance of reality of the possibility of a broken heart. I enjoyed reading this. Good flow, too
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Date: 8/12/2010 3:40:00 AM
bruises...the battle scars of the soul...as it lifts the spirit,to the higher heights,where fruit is untouched by lower hands...peace , jay
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Date: 8/12/2010 3:01:00 AM
Hard not to protect the heart when past relationships have hurt and made us fragile. Nice write.
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