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I Am With You

I was in a thrill While watching the beauty Of the diminishing Sun, and Feeling that the darkness would Slowly engulf everything. The returning birds Had eloped from the sky With their soul mates. The last of the fading sun beams too Were in a hurry To touch only the top of the trees. Only I was there, Watching and waiting While standing amid the flowers and trees. The diminishing Sun, Was trying to hide and go away, Knowing that the night would slowly Approach without stopping and Would remain there, Till the sunrays eliminates the darkness, By its sunbeams and light next morning. The colorful clouds in the sky, Were hovering all around the sun Making that evening, An evening of some memorable moments In that serene quietness, I was trying to hear, The melodious singing of the loving birds. To make it more enchanting, Crickets too, Became active to play their music, Watching the fast approaching night, And no one to disturb, their mighty kingdom. Suddenly I felt a touch of soft cool breeze, As if, it was was trying to console me, Do not worry “I am with you” Ravindra Kanpur India 24th Jan. 2012

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Date: 12/7/2012 6:59:00 AM
As I am reading this poem the sun is rising in my part of the world, although we are so far apart this sun like your words has connected us. May the hand of God alway rest on your shoulder. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:39:00 AM
as title says Ravindra.. I am with u my frind.. but it was time to leave PS and with good reason.. growth always needs change.. this was a stepping stone for me.. will let u know where I am writing again via email soon...luv..
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Date: 3/5/2012 5:08:00 PM
What a marvelous picture you have painted for us. Quite inspiring - thanks. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/12/2012 3:37:00 AM
GOOD MORNING RAVINDRA.. HOW ARE YOU?? I have the image of enchanting crickets.. I feel the breeze of a loved one.. I have not been on the soup, as much as i want to be. Still i love the beauty in your poem. Especially the opening in this one. I wonder, what a poem about me through your words would sound like.. Tonight I'm sleeping with the thought of you one day writing a sweet poem about me... he he.. what a little girlish thought... good night from my part of the world... always..PD
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Date: 1/26/2012 9:56:00 AM
Your serenity pervades in this poem Ravi. The peacefulness of evening is captured with the magic of your words. I love the inclusion of crickets as they are so much a part ofr twilight music. Luv, Elizabeth
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Date: 1/24/2012 12:20:00 AM
ravindra, I really enjoy your formatting style with this one. The way you divided into these individual stanzas and the short lines. Great imagery as well. A very nice poem from you, my friend!
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Date: 1/23/2012 1:43:00 PM
This gave me such a sense of serenity. I felt my moment give pause, and wanted to be there seeing and feeling the diminished sun at the end of the day. A beautiful poem, Ravindra...a lovely poem to accompany those photographs of which you speak.
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Date: 1/23/2012 1:17:00 PM
enjoy the poem Ravindra,thank you. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/23/2012 12:30:00 PM
This Poem would shortly be in a Video clip also with some eye soothing photographs supporting the Poem on my Music Channel on You Tube "RavindraKK1". My channel already contains four of my Videos songs and Poem recitations. Hope my PS friends would enjoy this new approach. With best wishes...Ravindra
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