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Below is the poem entitled I AM ONE HYPOCITE which was written by poet Dominic Amezimi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I am one hypocrite, imperfectly
I am all edges, no single curve
So rough all around, so badly wrong.

I like the positive, never to do
I say all that I should, none ever true
I step on every toe, I am the brute!

I am one evil mind, alas I am
I scheme all that I can, sleek, evil plans
What is the need? In here, no good is found.

But I’m sorry, each time I break the line
In tears and anger, every blessed time
And I despise at once the shameful crime

Would it ever change anything inside?
If after death one’s corpse would start to cry,
Could it draw any grace close, right beside?

I could but scrape my knees to beg for hope
I beg just for grace, not karats of gold.
I beg each time that my prayer would hold.

One hypocrite; imperfect, always would cry
Would beg for mercy, would forever try,
Though I be called a fool, and termed “unwise”.

Dominic A. Ami 03/04/2013
I am one hypocrite.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2015 12:02:00 AM
    Hi Dominic.. I just came across your fabulous poem and realized it had placed in a contest, please accept my belated congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 5/1/2015 11:49:00 PM
    Hi Dominic, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

  1. Date: 4/28/2015 3:07:00 PM
    Dominic, this is a great Honorable Mention poem. LINDA

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 6:30:00 AM
    This write is on point!!! I love it from start to finish..excellent pen you have!!

    Amezimi Avatar Dominic Amezimi
    Date: 4/4/2013 2:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    merci... beaucoup thanks alot