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I am Far From Death

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I am Far From Death

My love is starting to fade,
I don't know what to do,
The darkness is overwhelming,
But light's pulling me towards you.

No, you are the light,
And I'm trying to come closer,
And as you get further,
Over my mouth goes a sensor.

You don't understand
How much this means to me,
To find love and peace,
To find happiness and glee.

Now here I am,
So close I can feel your breath,
In your arms surrounded by lightness,
You are my savior as I am far from death. 

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  1. Date: 2/17/2011 6:25:00 AM
    Nice rhythm and rhyme. Obviously an outward reflection of what is going on in your heart!