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I am done trying

I hear mommy crying
I swear i die when i hear her cry 
She tells me everything is okay but i know she is lying 
Ahe tells me grandmas dying 
And i start crying 
All i can say is i am done trying !

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  1. Date: 3/28/2012 11:29:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Akira. I am reading today and hoping to find some inspiration to write. I had a run a week or so ago and now it wimped out on me. Thank you for posting your poetry and sharing it with others. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 1:43:00 PM
    deep!! never give up!

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 12:18:00 PM
    Hi Akira, This reminded me of when my grandmother died. All of us kids were put to working in the garden, cleaning the barn and seeing to the animals, and fixing the yard for the big dinner held after the wake. I was kept so busy that I had little time to weep. When the funeral did come, I did enough crying to fill a lake. Enjoyed your poem!

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    Date: 3/27/2012 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mark . Share this and my other poems with others too