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I Am Done

i am tired of writing songs for you the peak of the music crescendos no longer the songs are more mellow like a common country song by janetta (comment; i love country songs, but they are more open and uncomplicated).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/26/2012 12:40:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. You have good simple wording here that has no trouble in conveying clear images to the reader.
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Date: 1/24/2012 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Janetta. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2009 11:56:00 AM
wow dude. you just lost your mojo. jhl
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:44:00 PM
Sometimes the passion fades, Janetta, but I like to think it can be rekindled. And there's nothing wrong with country songs. They may not have the intensity of other musical forms, but they provide comfort and memorable stories. Very nice poem! Best Wishes, Carolyn
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