I Am

This is a poem by my 9 year old son Dylan. I am a smart kid and a techno geek I wonder how far space goes on I hear a dinosaur roar I see my dog that passed away I want to see my grandpa I am a smart kid and a techno geek I pretend to have one million dollars I feel my dad hugging me I touch my mom's brownies I worry about my parents I cry when summer's over I am a smart kid and a techno geek I understand that my dad has to be deployed I say aliens exist I dream that I'm being attacked by a sea serpent I try to make my life the best I hope my brother has a good education I am a smart kid and a techno geek.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/23/2016 9:01:00 PM

thank you for sharing your poem, your son did well. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 12:59:00 PM

RANDY, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/21/2009 5:26:00 AM

This is an excellent poem. I can tell from the tone you're having a great time. I like the refrain of being a techno geek. My son was that way too. The theme is consistent. Welcome to poetrysoup. Arigato and Gambatte! ~Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2009 12:24:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry Randy. Love, Carol

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/17/2009 6:02:00 AM

Beautiful poetry. May God bless your talented child; he portrayed his fervent dreams. Pls continue to encourage him to compose more poetry all the time. Wishing you all the best. I do appreciate your comment over my choka poem-Unique Visit. Thank you.