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I AM

This is a poem by my 9 year old son Dylan.  

I am a smart kid and a techno geek
I wonder how far space goes on
I hear a dinosaur roar
I see my dog that passed away
I want to see my grandpa
I am a smart kid and a techno geek

I pretend to have one million dollars
I feel my dad hugging me
I touch my mom's brownies
I worry about my parents
I cry when summer's over
I am a smart kid and a techno geek

I understand that my dad has to be deployed 
I say aliens exist
I dream that I'm being attacked by a sea serpent
I try to make my life the best
I hope my brother has a good education
I am a smart kid and a techno geek.

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  1. Date: 9/21/2009 5:26:00 AM
    This is an excellent poem. I can tell from the tone you're having a great time. I like the refrain of being a techno geek. My son was that way too. The theme is consistent. Welcome to poetrysoup. Arigato and Gambatte! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 12:24:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry Randy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 7:56:00 AM
    Alright, right on little brother. May GOD shine upon your spirit. Diogenes

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 6:02:00 AM
    Beautiful poetry. May God bless your talented child; he portrayed his fervent dreams. Pls continue to encourage him to compose more poetry all the time. Wishing you all the best. I do appreciate your comment over my choka poem-Unique Visit. Thank you.