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Hurricane Lovers

They say the Oleander tree is pure poison
if you see too many in a yard
a witch certainly lives there about
long blades of turquoise leaves 
carve up the sky in to shards of bluepink and sparkle gold
My tree has pink blossoms but some are as white
White Lilly Flour
soft as it can be
powdered silk with milk
egg and salt
rising in the heat
I look out the window
beyond the sheer green curtains
past the sharded sky
past the poisin tree
I am certainly a witch
I hold you like a ball of pure white light
How can you show and not tell?

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  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:53:00 PM
    Erie but oh so cool. I enjoyed this magical spooky location. I guess you cast your spell on me.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:41:00 PM
    Grits,, nice to read this one again ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 5:47:00 AM
    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Grits. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:04:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoyed your writing this morning, thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:17:00 AM
    Grits. love the thought and ending...pd