Len Gasun Poet Haiku

Notes About The Poem

By the natural disasters which always occur in any country 

Hurricane

Hurricanes


blow away our canes

stumbling us down on the ground

rise to walk again


rebuilding places

like a midrib broom as one

the sun shines again




Nov. 7, 2012  

Note: This Haiku was inspired by the theme of the previous contest of SandyIvy, with theme, Hurricane.  It came late because of my PC problem. 

Honorable Mention
Contest: Your Best Haiku
Judged: 11/18/2012
Sponsor: Poet Nathan A

Second Place
Contest: November's Poem
Judged: 11/26/2012
Sponsor: Poet PD

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Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2013 at 1:43 PM Stopping by to say hello my sweet and wonderful sis.. I'm working on my computers microphone it is sweet and awesome.. *always~ :-) PD

Reggae Magnet December 25, 2012 at 7:43 AM Like the topic, covered this also. lets hope you were't blown away. ice write, will read more.

Poet Destroyer A December 6, 2012 at 6:50 PM Hi Leo,,, heading to bed in a minute... stopping by to leave you hugs,, xox~ always & forever... your sis-ie PD

Carol Sunshine Brown December 3, 2012 at 1:12 PM Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Leonora. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown November 30, 2012 at 6:38 AM Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Leonora. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2012 at 5:58 PM a well deserved win I see here, Leonora. BIG congrats on PD's winners list.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair November 28, 2012 at 6:44 AM Congrats, Leonora, on this top win!! Jag

Gwendolen Song November 27, 2012 at 2:42 PM A spectacular hope emanates from these winning lines! Congrats, Leonora! :) gwendolen

Olusegun Arowolo November 27, 2012 at 2:03 PM Splendid and wonderful piece,Leonora...Nice haiku....Congratulations on your 2nd place superb win in this contest....And thanks for your wonderful comments on my poems.You are so dear and amiable.Kudos to you,my dear friend...

Bukang Liwayway November 27, 2012 at 9:39 AM Congratulations my dear friend for winning 2nd place...cheers!!! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 27, 2012 at 1:34 AM Congratulations hun on another winning place, hugs xx

Yanny Widjanarko November 26, 2012 at 10:16 PM Leonara, congrats again to this fascinating haiku :D- Hug, Yanny

Poet Destroyer A November 26, 2012 at 9:37 PM Hello Leonora, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry.. good night sis... luv~pd

Yanny Widjanarko November 22, 2012 at 5:27 PM belated congrats of your haiku dear Leonora - Hug, Yanny

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2012 at 11:12 AM Congrats on your great win..Sara

Joseph May November 21, 2012 at 6:10 AM congrats on your win Leonora

Gail Debole November 20, 2012 at 3:50 PM Hello Leonora - Many congrats on your win! - Gail

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2012 at 9:56 PM hey, this must be a brand new one!! Big congrats to you. And I especially like that first one. it's so cute.

Poet Destroyer A November 19, 2012 at 2:45 PM Hello, Leo,,, my poetry sister... how are you... aweee... I did not know you missed the contest.... Nathan, got good taste when it comes to his wins... LOL..love being on the top of his list,,, of course he only picked my poem, cause he enjoyed the chain... :-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

Bukang Liwayway November 19, 2012 at 8:24 AM Congratulations on your win my dear friend Norie, God bless you always and advance Merry Merry Christmas to you. mwauh!! Love, Mary

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 19, 2012 at 2:03 AM CONGRATS LEONORA ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS MAJESTIC HAIKU DEAR FRIEND .. WISHING U AND FAMILY A VERY HAPPY AND BLESSED THANKSGIVING LUV.

Nathan D. November 18, 2012 at 9:38 PM good haiku' Nate

Sara Kendrick November 17, 2012 at 5:59 PM Great work..Enjoyed reading it..I am sure that it would have been on the winners' list if it had been an entry..Thanks for the visits to my blog and my poems..Sara

Harry Horsman November 17, 2012 at 7:52 AM these are excellent, Leonora

Poet Destroyer A November 13, 2012 at 12:24 PM Hello, sisie... how are you? I did not even see you had this poem. Sorry, to hear you missed the contest... :-( I bet sindy would have loved this haiku... The sun always brings out the new in another day... sorry to hear about your PC... xox~pd

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