Hurricane

confused sky vigorously shakes ocean lives lost

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2013 12:47:00 PM

sandy, quickly before I leave the house, a soupmail for ya.

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/22/2013 8:28:00 PM

called me crazy but i am very fond of hurricanes and twister

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/14/2012 7:33:00 PM

Sandra, a very true and sad haiku... Hurricanes are a force we can not control.. good haiku...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2012 3:02:00 PM

oh, goodie, here is a haiku I had missed. I really like it, Sandra!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/12/2012 5:56:00 AM

Being a New Yorker I really feel this piece... We are all safe in my town but much around us have suffered as you describe,,, excellent work... big hugs Michael

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/10/2012 2:09:00 PM

nice one, Sandra.. paints a picture does this...

Kash Poet

Date: 11/6/2012 7:28:00 PM

Good one!Enjoyed the read.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/6/2012 3:10:00 AM

Hurricanes and natural disasters have been on my mind quite a bit lately. Powerful verse. Always, Laura