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Humpty Dumpty Smoked Out

Huffy Puffy had a smoke Huffy Puffy had to choke All the king’s doctors and all the king’s men Couldn’t put Huffy Puffy’s lungs together again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/6/2012 6:49:00 PM
James, a good poem and point... smoking is bad... LINDA
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:51:00 AM
oh,my this is great fun here. I love clerihews.Let me see your other one
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Date: 2/16/2011 3:58:00 PM
Witty but also very wise, James. People keep trying to kick the habit; it's not easy. Some wear skin patches, some think no one can smell the smoke on their clothing. Wrong! Let's offer a toast in good cheer to Huffy Puffy and hope he finds a better set of doctors. LOL Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:03:00 PM
Good one which is so true..It is a amazing how some people smoke and really don't have that much trouble and some are just devasted by lung problems and other problems that ends their lives....Sara
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Date: 2/10/2011 6:42:00 AM
Your poem is very true...Jimmy
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