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Hummingbird Love

Whirling, twirling lovers fly Falling through the tree tops high. Taking hold with all their might Swirling love, alive in flight. Floating down upon the breeze Spinning round like maple seeds. Holding tight, not letting go Nearly touching down below, Pulling free, then giving chase Longing for another taste. Calling out their sweethearts tune Hoping for another boon. Pairing up, one more time, Sipping nectar so divine! Tanya Harrington For: Good Enough Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/19/2013 1:13:00 PM
Hello Tanya, how are you.. a lovely feeling that flutters right through the heart... I love this poem so much, I think I've read the poem over 5 times already... always~ Linda
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Date: 11/1/2012 9:59:00 PM
Wonderful piece,Tanya..I love this...Congratulations on your HM in this contest..Kudos to you,pal...
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Date: 11/1/2012 2:30:00 PM
Oh, MY romance in the SKY. Love this one. I'd have put it higher on the list. Congrats, sweetie. (I liked it just as much seeing it this second time)
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Date: 10/30/2012 1:54:00 PM
Wonderful poem here Tanya!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:32:00 AM
This is so beautiful! Congratulations on your win, Tanya! hugs:) LG
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Tany. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2012 11:38:00 PM
CONGRATS TANYA ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS FABULOUS WRITE LUV .. AWESOME PIECE ..
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Date: 10/29/2012 10:21:00 PM
Who would have thought. Very cute tale. congratulations Tanya. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:25:00 PM
Tanya.. Congratulations with your wonderful and "Good Enough" poem in Sandy's contest. xox~PD
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Date: 10/29/2012 7:22:00 PM
:-) love your good win' thank you' Sandy
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Date: 9/14/2012 2:32:00 PM
Here is another wonderful win,, love re-reading this one again... the image is outstanding.. No wonder picky Brian, adored the view... xox~pd
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Date: 8/11/2012 2:04:00 PM
truly beautiful write, Tanya
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Date: 8/10/2012 10:50:00 PM
Did I tell you this reminds me of the little birds who built nests above my garage this summer. So sweet.
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:50:00 PM
i get a great poetic kick out of this, tanya...enjoyed the hinner scene and rhyming schene.. so goood!?") huggs!
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Date: 8/10/2012 4:44:00 PM
Wow, I can see the hummer in flight. Good work.
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "#195" contest Tanya. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2012 9:10:00 PM
th.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD
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Date: 8/9/2012 9:59:00 AM
beautiful poem, Tanya, love the flow and sincerity.
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on the win. A very interesting poem.
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Date: 8/8/2012 3:43:00 PM
ALL RIGHT. I see one of my favorite poems also made Brian's top of his list! Congrats. And congrats on your win in the Lost contest too.
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Date: 8/8/2012 3:00:00 PM
Congrats on a spendid win! Terry
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:21:00 PM
This is one of my favorite poems I've read tonight. I enjoy its brevity and lyrical quality! So pretty.
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Date: 8/6/2012 7:17:00 PM
Beautiful picture you have drawn with your words.
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Date: 8/6/2012 5:26:00 PM
Only Seals and Crofts could describe those wonderful speedy birds better than this. Good rhyming and descriptiveness.
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